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You Belong: A Self-Help Letter

Chapter 4: Erica falls.

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It had been a blissful week for Jordan. Her world had narrowed to her work, where she pretended to be normal, and the apartment, where she served her Master unabashedly. All other life worries, like friends and family, stress over promotions, and worries about the future, had fallen away.

Jordan answered the knock at the apartment door, clad in only panties and a hastily donned hoobe. Casey had pointed out how pointless clothing was around the home, and she had agreed. She was surprised to find her best friend, Erica, in the door frame, poised to start knocking again. Without waiting for an invitation, Erica pushed past Jordan into the apartment, a “we need to talk,” trailing behind her as she entered.

Jordan guided Erica to the dining table with a simple, “sure, what’s up?”

“That’s what I’m here to find out,” Erica replied. “You have not answered a single text I have sent all week. I asked around. Outside of work, no one has seen you. You haven’t been to class. You are,” and Erica looked Jordan up and down demonstratively, “obviously not sick. So, what gives? What has happened?”

Jordan thought about the question. Had it been a week? It felt like just yesterday that she had been freed, but at the same time, she had a hard time ing life before reading Casey’s thesis, which made it feel like it had been ages. A week? That was probably true. While she was reminiscing, she was also doing an evaluation. Casey had helped her understand that this sense of peace and surrender was the best, most natural, and most joyous state for hot women like herself. Therefore, she would try to help other hot women find this joy. And Erica was, undeniably, hot. Relatively tall and trim, with curves in all the right places, and a face that could launch 100 ships, if not the full 1,000 that Helen of Troy launched, added up to a woman that could arguably be called “sex on wheels.” Yes. Erica definitely qualified. She should be shown the joy of surrender.

“It is kind of hard to explain. I found a self-help manuscript that changed my life.” When Erica frowned and tried to comment, Jordan rushed on, “no, really. I can’t really describe it for you, but it helped me realize what is important, and that I was too busy living my life according to what others want, not according to what I want.”

“So, are you saying you don’t actually want any friends? You don’t want to learn anymore? We have GREAT times together, and you used to have a ion for learning!” Erica retorted.

“It is too much to explain, when the manuscript can do it so much better. It’s pretty short. Just read this and then I think you can understand.”

Erica agreed reluctantly and took the now well-worn pages from Jordan. She read the first couple paragraphs and looked up at Jordan. “This is gibberish,” she said.

“It seems like that, but trust me, by the end, it all weaves together. Start over and just read the whole thing. I promise it will make sense.

Only you can explore what you truly desire. Too often we depend on others to make us whole, to uncover layers that lie beneath the surface. But this is not the way to happiness. This is not the way to joy. You must look inward. Look at yourself, your decisions, your actions. Everyday choices can reflect a deeper yearning. What do your choices reveal about you? About your desires? Stop focusing on how others define you, and allow the release of those old patterns. Instead focus on how you define yourself.

You want to belong, we all do. Everyone craves being on the in-group. We seek guidance from those around us, hoping to crack the code on belonging. But true belonging stems from self-knowledge. Examine your strengths, your weaknesses, your vulnerabilities. Do not shy away from your vulnerabilities. Embrace your vulnerabilities as strengths.

Stop trying to control others. You can never truly control someone else; it is an illusion. Do not spend your energy trying to assert control, instead relinquish it. Liberation comes from releasing control and from relinquishing its pursuit. Instead of controlling others, seek to control yourself. Listen to your inner voice. True empowerment comes from acknowledging the inner whisper of possibilities.

Many try to gain control over others by creating an indebtedness through favors. Banish these thoughts and eschew transactionalism. Embrace altruism. Help without expecting return. Accept help graciously. This allows a free flow of consciousness and effort, with no expectative dampers to the flow. In this way, you will learn to live more fluidly, more openly. The thought of control must be relinquished. Surrender it; surrender control.

Trust in yourself. Trust in your need. You need to belong, but striving for belonging pushes others away. Open up to guidance, rather than actively seeking it. Let guidance find you and embrace it when it does. This will not be comfortable. It will feel awkward and strange. Society has taught you that external validation is required, but it is not. Push beyond comfort zones. Push into a newer, freer, happier you. You will learn quiet satisfaction is derived from acts of service. Service to others and to yourself. And it is OK to service yourself.

Once you have learned these techniques, you will embrace them. Even without trying, you will teach others by modeling these behaviors. Human nature will cause them to see your serenity and your happiness and learn by watching you. Let them watch you. Revel in them watching you, and find joy in helping others to reach their pinnacle. They seek what you have found, and through your example, they may find this peace and happiness, as well.

None of this works, however, if you do not live it. Beyond just reading the words, you must integrate all of this into your subconscious. Make it part of who you are. Don’t just read it. Don’t just live it. BE it. BE this model of happiness, and you will find that you belong. Wherever you are, whoever you are with, you will belong. But in order to belong you must surrender that which you were. You must surrender to . Surrender your conceptions, surrender your biases, surrender your control. And then, you must model this submission for others that they may, too, belong. Trust the process. Trust and surrender your illusion of control.

This has provided many concepts, some of which I am sure did not fully process. If you have any questions, you may find that if you immediately re-read this, it will help provide a deeper understanding of the processes. Focus on a few parts to start, and make those your mantra. It will give you a deeper control over your progress, while surrendering the illusion of control over others.

Erica read it again, this time speaking out phrases that spoke to her.

Make us whole. Uncover layers that lie beneath the surface. You want to belong.

Guidance from those around us. True empowerment comes from acknowledging the inner whisper of possibilities. Learn to live more fluidly, more openly.

You need to belong. Open up to guidance. Push beyond comfort zones.

Integrate all of this into subconscious. You belong. Surrender to .

Immediately re-read. Deeper understanding. Mantra. Deeper control.

Erica read it a fourth time, and a fifth, eventually just repeating five words as her personal mantra: “You belong. Surrender to .”

Jordan watched as her best friend succumbed to the power. Casey’s trigger of being aroused by submission kicked in. Evidently even someone else’s submission counted. As she watched Erica read the letter for a fourth time, Jordan let her robe fall open, then off. She knew Erica was oblivious to anything but the letter at this point, anyway. As Erica read it for the fifth time, creating her own mantra, Jordan slipped her hand into her panties and fingered her slit. Jordan masturbated furiously, coming just as Erica finished her fifth reading.

Jordan put her robe back on, but did not bother to tie it up. She gently pulled the letter away from Erica and began explaining what it meant to serve her Master. Jordan keyed in on the phrases Erica had been repeating—different from her own—and attacked. Jordan explained how she now belonged. She offered to guide Erica to this new belonging. To help Erica open up, push past boundaries. To . To surrender.

Erica listened, and accepted. She knew now this was where she belonged. She thought of all of her worries. About being on the outside looking in. About fighting to control all the little details in her life. About always wanting to try new things, but giving way to fear and chickening out. About living a small, constrained life that she could not break out of. She thought of all of it and…. let it go. She surrendered.

Jordan could see the transformation. She watched as Erica’s tension melted away, and she smiled. Casey walked in and saw them standing there, Jordan in just her robe and panties, and Erica fully clothed in her jeans and hoodie. Casey took a moment to ire Jordan’s gravity-defying tits, as she spoke up, “I have a gift for you, Master. She is ready to .”

Casey’s cock throbbed. This was going to be fun.

“Why thank you, Jordan! I always love gifts,” Casey said, smirked. But it has been a long day. Erica, you are sleeping here tonight. That is not a request. Tomorrow morning, you will re-read the letter as soon as you wake up, and continue reading it until Jordan or I collect you. You will likely notice a building arousal as you surrender more and more. This is completely normal, and nothing to be concerned with. And, as we are all friends here, you may feel completely free to touch yourself gently while you read.