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You Belong: A Self-Help Letter

Chapter 2: Jordan falls

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Fighting his growing anticipation, and playing it off as just another routine paper, Casey pushed back from the desk and held out the printed pages to Jordan, the warm paper still carrying the faint scent of fresh ink and his own subtle cologne. “Alright, it’s ready.”

Jordan set her magazine aside, her breath catching as she took the sheets, her fingers brushing against his in a fleeting touch that sent a shiver up her arm. She settled deeper into the couch, crossing her legs unconsciously to steady herself, and began to read, her eyes scanning the words with earnest focus.

The letter read as follows:

Only you can explore what you truly desire. Too often we depend on others to make us whole, to uncover layers that lie beneath the surface. But this is not the way to happiness. This is not the way to joy. You must look inward. Look at yourself, your decisions, your actions. Everyday choices can reflect a deeper yearning. What do your choices reveal about you? About your desires? Stop focusing on how others define you, and allow the release of those old patterns. Instead focus on how you define yourself.

You want to belong, we all do. Everyone craves being on the in-group. We seek guidance from those around us, hoping to crack the code on belonging. But true belonging stems from self-knowledge. Examine your strengths, your weaknesses, your vulnerabilities. Do not shy away from your vulnerabilities. Embrace your vulnerabilities as strengths.

Stop trying to control others. You can never truly control someone else; it is an illusion. Do not spend your energy trying to assert control, instead relinquish it. Liberation comes from releasing control and from relinquishing its pursuit. Instead of controlling others, seek to control yourself. Listen to your inner voice. True empowerment comes from acknowledging the inner whisper of possibilities.

Many try to gain control over others by creating an indebtedness through favors. Banish these thoughts and eschew transactionalism. Embrace altruism. Help without expecting return. Accept help graciously. This allows a free flow of consciousness and effort, with no expectative dampers to the flow. In this way, you will learn to live more fluidly, more openly. The thought of control must be relinquished. Surrender it; surrender control.

Trust in yourself. Trust in your need. You need to belong, but striving for belonging pushes others away. Open up to guidance, rather than actively seeking it. Let guidance find you and embrace it when it does. This will not be comfortable. It will feel awkward and strange. Society has taught you that external validation is required, but it is not. Push beyond comfort zones. Push into a newer, freer, happier you. You will learn quiet satisfaction is derived from acts of service. Service to others and to yourself. And it is OK to service yourself.

Once you have learned these techniques, you will embrace them. Even without trying, you will teach others by modeling these behaviors. Human nature will cause them to see your serenity and your happiness and learn by watching you. Let them watch you. Revel in them watching you, and find joy in helping others to reach their pinnacle. They seek what you have found, and through your example, they may find this peace and happiness, as well.

None of this works, however, if you do not live it. Beyond just reading the words, you must integrate all of this into your subconscious. Make it part of who you are. Don’t just read it. Don’t just live it. BE it. BE this model of happiness, and you will find that you belong. Wherever you are, whoever you are with, you will belong. But in order to belong you must surrender that which you were. You must surrender to . Surrender your conceptions, surrender your biases, surrender your control. And then, you must model this submission for others that they may, too, belong. Trust the process. Trust and surrender your illusion of control.

This has provided many concepts, some of which I am sure did not fully process. If you have any questions, you may find that if you immediately re-read this, it will help provide a deeper understanding of the processes. Focus on a few parts to start, and make those your mantra. It will give you a deeper control over your progress, while surrendering the illusion of control over others.

An hour slipped by like a dream, Jordan’s world narrowing to the page as she pored over the text, her lips moving silently at first, then whispering aloud.

Explore. Uncover layers that lie beneath the surface. Allow the release of old patterns.

Guidance from those around us. Liberation comes from releasing control. Learn to live more fluidly, more openly.

Surrender control. Open up to guidance. Push beyond comfort zones.

Integrate all of this into subconscious. Trust and surrender.

Immediately re-read. Mantra. Deeper control.

“Release of old patterns,” Jordan murmured, feeling a newfound lightness. “Open up to guidance,” she said breathily, the words wrapping around her mind like a comforting embrace, though the effect was subtle at first. “Surrender control,” she repeated, her voice gaining a rhythmic cadence over time. “Trust and surrender,” she stated confidently, followed immediately by “mantra.” Her body responded in a mild way—a faint warmth rising in her cheeks and a slight quickening of her breath—as the letter’s suggestions stirred gentle, long-suppressed thoughts of submission, though not overwhelmingly so.

Jordan re-read the letter over and over again, and by the fifth read, she was simply saying “Trust and surrender” on loop. It had truly become her mantra.

Emboldened by her gradually deepening trance-like state, Casey rose from his chair after a while. “Jordan, stand up,” he said, his voice a command that sent a subtle thrill through her. She hesitated briefly before obeying, rising to her feet with a slight tremor. Casey wanted to explore his control. “Tell me your most shameful secret” Casey commanded.

“I tell everyone I’m lesbian, because it is easier to be a butch tomboy lesbian than it that I am really bi and that my tomboy act is really because I don’t how to interact with men,” Jordan blurted out. Followed immediately by “Holy shit, why did I tell you that? I mean, it is good to get it off my chest, but…” Jordan flushed deeply.

“It is because you trust me, Jordan. You trust me deeply. Now what was the end of that ‘but…’? Tell me.”

“But I can’t tell that to a guy. Now you are going to treat me different. One of the reasons we worked is that we were both bros. Now you are going to treat me as a woman,” Jordan itted, her shoulders slumping as if she had already lost Casey’s friendship.

Casey took Jordan’s chin and forced her to look him in the eye. “Jordan, trust me, I have always thought of you as a woman. Since we are confessing, I have to it that with a body like yours, it would be impossible NOT to think of you as a woman. No matter how much you try to hide it with your tomboy act. Everything is fine. No one is hurt. Nothing is ruined. Believe me.”

“I... I believe you,” Jordan repeated.

“And speaking of that body… remove your tee,” Casey ordered, watching intently, and she pulled it off, revealing a lacy bra that clung to her curves. “Now take off your shorts,” he directed, his words precise, and she slid them down, stepping out of them obediently and showing her matching panties. “Do you see how obedience is simple? How it is freeing?” he asked. “You understand that I am taking control over you, and you secretly want me to do so. You would never it it before your new liberation, but you have wanted this for a long time. But you are free now. Free to surrender and obey. So go ahead. it that you want this.”

Jordan’s breath hitched. Casey was right. But itting it was true would be destroying the protection she had built around herself. The tomboy act. The countless times she had been his wingman at the bar. The friend zone she had maintained. The false bravado. All of it would be shattered. Gone. But it was true. “Trust and surrender,” Jordan whispered, and then, firmly, confidently, and loudly, she continued, “it’s true. Since very shortly after I met you, Casey, I have yearned to surrender to you. To submit to you and let you guide me however you see fit.”

itting it lifted the weight off Jordan’s shoulders, and she regained her confidence and perked back up. She felt so much freer after having surrendered control. And, she was surprised to find, just a little bit wet. Her nipples had not fully perked up, but they had thickened a little. Holy shit, did she have a fetish she never knew about?

“We shall begin today. This place can use some tidying. I am heading to bed, but you need to do some cleaning,” Casey commanded, gesturing around the room. Jordan immediately began wiping down the table, her hands steadying with each task. Casey went to his room and went to sleep, while Jordan stayed up most of the night, cleaning every surface, every nook, and every cranny.