Reader’s Picks: Jay Inkwell
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The erotic fiction I write and enjoy reading tends to be male-dominant / female-submissive mind control stories with themes of dominance, humiliation, non-consensual sex, and bondage & discipline of the women involved. I prefer tales where the women know they’re being abused by a man, but they are unable to effectively resist, they can’t do anything about it, or perhaps they are even complicit. I also prefer tales where there is resistance and a gradual defeat of the women. I like interesting characters, interesting plot twists, internal consistency, and logical justifications. I want the main characters to feel real and make rational decisions. While I enjoy tales of humiliation, I also enjoy sweet romantic tales as long as there is some kind of feminine submission. I don’t enjoy stories with lots of misspellings or incorrect grammar. I want stories that are so well-crafted that I can lose myself in them.
This is a delightful story with many interesting characters and a carefully crafted plot that leads to a satisfying ending. The basic premise involves a “code of conduct” that our victims must disobey. I love stories that involve gradually accumulating rules, because I enjoy reading about the process of degradation. This story has rule accumulation in spades. Rules meaning the opposite of what they seem to say is surprisingly erotic. The ending wraps up all the key characters’ conflicts and is true to its premise. This story is highly recommended.
Happy To Oblige — Downing Street
I’m not the first to recommend Downing Street. I’m not the first to recommend Happy to Oblige. I make no apologies. Downing Street is a legend in male-dominant/female submissive erotica. He has contributed many excellent tales through many decades. Among his many wonderful stories, I keep returning to this gem. In this tale, Debbie is happy to do many things for her 18-year-old student Johnny. Johnny increasingly takes advantage of her. I love her gradual humiliation and exploitation. Each scene builds on the previous ones. Its ending feels earned and satisfying.
Good to the Last Drop — Mister Harvest
This is a classic story. Our hero slowly gains sexual power over the women around him, not instantly but over time. All of the main characters are interesting, distinct, and have their own goals. Most importantly, they behave rationally. Its interesting situations are hot. It doesn’t have a real ending, unfortunately, but I recommend it anyway.
Impulse Control is a story well worth reading. This story slowly ratchets up the sexual tension over several chapters, and when it unleashes you enjoy the ride. Chapters 7 and 8 are especially my favorites. I especially appreciate that there are well fleshed out characters, with their own desires and concerns. Its ending wasn’t what I was looking for, as I prefer clear unrestricted male domination, but it was a clear resolution.
Archer Stories: Gift of Orgasms—Aggressive — Archer Stories
This is a spectacular tale. A man receives a special power, and slowly subjugates multiple women with it. I appreciated that the first girl, Niki, repeatedly tries to resist yet finds herself increasingly under his control. The downfalls of the women, especially the first two, are hot. The story’s ending is satisfying and logically completes it. The author wrote another story with the same concept but less domination and humiliation. You can guess what version I preferred. This story does have some spelling and grammar errors, not something I prefer, but those blemishes are not enough to subvert its many strengths. The story is aggressive, yet it’s somewhat sweet by its end (in a fucked-up way).
A Leashed Tiger — Alecta’s Shadow
Alecta’s Shadow is a great author who has crafted many wonderful works. Here I pick an awesome and overlooked tale. The premise of A Leashed Tiger is different, involving a mind controller increasingly controlled by someone who cannot control minds himself. Her gradual increasing degradation over time is exactly what I love. It’s hot! The main characters aren’t merely props, they are rational actors in a high-stakes competition. Her resistance over time, and the penalties she reaps from her failures, make this a masterpiece. In a few places Serena’s wallowing in self-pity is too repetitive for me, but that complaint is like complaining about a few excessive brush strokes on the Mona Lisa. If you like male-dominant stories set in a real world setting, read this.
Rape Safety Hypnosis — All These Roadworks
If you like male-dominated erotica, you need to read the works of All These Roadworks. He is a literal professional and a key master of the craft. His creator site has some books for sale and some interesting analyses as well. On a personal note, some of the excellent works of All These Roadworks were a key inspiration to me to write erotica. Warning: many of his works, including this one, are dark. Some are even dark for me, and that is saying something. Some of his other works have been picked as reader’s picks, so I’ve picked an often-overlooked short story of his. This story sets up the premise and immediately begins the road of degradation and humiliation of our female victim. The ending is exactly what you might want from such a story. All of this, with only a few words. I especially appreciate that the heroine is trapped and later hurt by those who care about her. It’s hard to beat the intensity of a girl being betrayed by those she trusts.
From the Ruler’s Blog — Veiled Ruler
There are many serious stories involving a mind controller with special powers who carefully thinks through the commands he will impose on others. This is not one of those stories. Instead, the offscreen mind controller repeatedly imposes not-thought-through rules on the world, with absurd results. Men cleverly exploit the rules, while women unsuccessfully try to protect themselves from those rules. I enjoyed this story’s different approach to the genre. You’ll laugh out loud at some of its insane situations. This is essentially a collection of short stories set in the same world, not a single long story, and that is fine.
A High School Reunion of Different Sorts — Cindy Silver Eyes
For over twenty years the Alt.Sex.Stories Text Repository (ASSTR) was the largest freely-available archive of erotic fiction. It is now long gone. Thankfully some of the ASSTR works, like this older story by Cindy Silver Eyes, are still available. In this tale Cindy finds herself subjugated and humiliated by her new employer. Her added humiliations make it hot. Check out Cindy Silver Eyes’ other stories as well.
This is more romantic and sweet than most of my other picks, but it’s so good and I am a sucker for the romantic. This is a male dominant / female submissive tale that’s consensual, happy, and so much fun. Every chapter is a delight. Its one weakness is that the story simply stops where I wish it’d kept going. Where are the “meet the parents” events? Even without a true ending, it is well worth reading.
This is a fantastic inadequately-appreciated gem. I love stories where there is a gradual sexual conquest and rules are created over time. Here we have a contract review providing both. Cleverly unique. I had no idea that legal reviews could be so sexy. I recommend it.
This is a sexy story published in 2007 that somehow manages to incorporate both humiliation and sweetness. Its premise is interesting and original. By the end they’re both happy, so I guess it’s a happy ending. Recommended.
This is an older story added in July 2000. While I’m not into femdom, male domination of a female who in turn dominates another female is awesome. It’s an interesting dynamic. I appreciate how the more-dominant woman becomes the submissive one.
Ugly Stupid and Fat — D. Holzer
This is male dominant / female submissive story that is surprisingly sweet and romantic. The ending is surprising when you first read it, yet perfect and somehow what you should have expected. Adorable.
This particular author hasn’t written many stories, but quality is more important than quantity. This story involves a pair of speeches that are life-changing to the hearers and sexy. You don’t see the changes, but that doesn’t matter. You might think it would be boring, but it’s not. If you like male-dominant stories, this is strongly recommended.
Discipline and Reward — Baltimore Rogers
Most novels have between 70,000 to 100,00 words. This story has over 113,000 words. So yes, this is a long story. It’s well worth the read. Once you start, it’s hard to put down. The story involves a superheroine whose powers and background should be familiar, with a male lead who has interesting and completely different powers. It has plenty of plot twists, yet they don’t seem absurd, and the main characters are interesting. The protagonist starts looking like a villain, yet over time he ends up being sympathetic. This is male dominant / female submissive story, but slowly transforms into a story of mutual care that I found compelling. It slowly builds to a well-crafted ending that logically follows from everything before it and is satisfying.
Jukebox has written many stories, but I think this one is my favorite. The setup of this short story is interesting, because the female victim is being compelled to pretend she’s acting consensually. The visiting male mentat is the only person she’s encountered who can determine what’s really going on. It’s an interesting setup I haven’t seen elsewhere, but it makes sense once you start reading it. I liked the ending. It intentionally left some things unresolved, and for this story it worked well.
The story has an interesting (and creepy) concept. It’s set in the not-too-distant future with technology that doesn’t exist, so I would call it science fiction. It involves a young woman whose family falls from grace, so she ends up in the clutches of a sadistic young man. The premise is hot. Its only problem is that it abruptly stops instead of having a satisfying ending. In spite of that, it’s worth reading.
College Undercover — greyscribbler
The author greyscribbler has been delighting many with well-written and interesting mind control stories from 2011 on. This one is a large work, over 175,000 words. That length is bigger than many novels, and well worth the read. Policewoman Carol investigates what is happening to some college women, helps end the evil diabolical plot... and yet ends up being ensnared herself. The “solved but didn’t” premise is interesting and different. I found myself wanting to read the next chapter, and the next, and the next.
I Can—The Train — greyscribbler
I’ve been trying to pick only one story per author, but I give up. This short story is good and hot, so I’m listing it even though I’ve listed another greyscribbler story. This tale is proof that greyscribbler can create great short stories as well as great long ones. This short story jumps immediately into the action, where our mind-controlling man twists two female strangers in hot and evil ways. The emphasis on girl-on-girl sex isn’t usually my thing, but it’s sexy and well-done. If want a great short male-dominant story, this is a good one to choose.